Please review my site!!!!!!

[Pitter Stwart]

Friends,

Please review new site slkosher.com. It is a travel site. It offers a journey to suit every taste and you'll get information about cruise ships which are luxurious floating resorts offering every comfort, convenience and amenity that one could imagine.

Thanks
kosher travel (http://www.slkosher.com/)

[RedMango]

Hi there

I am an article writer from the UK. I am currently dabbling in IM and saw your site.

If you ever need further unique content (although what is there is good), just drop me a PM or email me at redmango.info@gmail.com

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My rate is $10 per 500 words.

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http://redmangowriters.wordpress.com

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[instantcash2012]

The site is well done!

[QUOTE=Pitter Stwart;4122]Friends,

Please review new site slkosher.com. It is a travel site. It offers a journey to suit every taste and you'll get information about cruise ships which are luxurious floating resorts offering every comfort, convenience and amenity that one could imagine.

Thanks

[Oleyea]

Looks great... clean, easy to understand and navigate, like the fact that you call your picture page 'memories' etc. Overall, a good looking site that I feel like I can trust. Good job!

But since you are asking for reviews...

I can think of two things that I feel that would improve the site.

1. The comic sans font on the intro page is a litte weird. It does not make sense in my eyes, which results in me losing a bit initial focus when I start reading your intro text. I would probably exchange those parts with something like a Calisto font instead.

2. Change your headline. You are already state the Kosher cruise name several times below. I would probably go for a more lively headline. Such as:

"Explore....Experience....Enjoy!" - or something like that.

That would result in the visitors looking for an answer to where they can do those things, rather then being informed what kosher cruises has to offer straight on.

Furthermore, a cruise is something special. Something you look forward to. So instead of just informing, try to write a little bit more in pictures, try to make your visitors imagine rather then reading. :wink:

[Lisa Lashes]

Hi,

Does anyone know how I would go about selling a website?

[gregmuzz]

Hi,

Does anyone know how I would go about selling a website?

whats the details?