How can this be improved? :toilet14:

[RogerThat]

ww.HowWhereWhatWays.com[/url]

[jonnyellins]

Hi Roger,

First of all you need to re-write all the text into your own words, there are nearly 200 websites that same as yours currently so you won't get any traffic!

You need traffic to make sales so go get writing

Regards,

[carolline]

I think so. Good idea! I'll try it soon!