New site - please review - all comments seen as constructive

[Nelsor]

Hi, I'm new to this but have developed my site makememoneyathome.com

I've set up on Adwords and although I'm getting the clicks my sales have only resulted in two. Whilst a little disheartened the two sales that I have had have simply made me more determined.

Could you please have a look through my site and offer any advice for improvement.

Many thanks

[gregmuzz]

Look on the bright side of things you already have 2 sales!!!

how long have you been up and running?

[Nelsor]

Just over two weeks now, but spent most of last week fine tuning the website to get it something like.

Don't get me wrong I'm happy with two sales, it just makes you want more and more.

[gregmuzz]

I have been doing for 2 weeks now and had NO sales as yet, but i have not been using Adwords, I have generally been marketing the site and adding content for now, you can see it here www.genuinecashmaker.com

[Nelsor]

The Adwords is OK but it started to run away with itself the other day, was getting loads of clicks but these just weren't converting. This then increases the cost of the advertising.

[andyb23]

Hi, Nice site, well done on the 2 sales im struggling to get traffic to my site at the moment any recommendations welcome. Please check out my site and give me any feedback.

yourfreedomlifestyle.com

Thanks

Andy

[gregmuzz]

I am guessing maybe add more content, although i have added over 60 articles i am still not getting enough traffic.

If anyone wants to discuss our quest to make money or generally swap ideas you can add me on MSN gregmurray1968@hotmail.com

I look forward to chatting with you

[Nelsor]

Hi, your site looks good, but you have a nice big space down the right hand side of the page, thats advertising space at your disposal. Fill it with the banners available from this site. You can never have too many links to your products.

[andyb23]

Hi guys,

I am on msm (andy.brenchley@gmail.com) have only recently got my website up and running. Am currently using a couple of traffic websites one which offers 1000 visitors for about £5.00 and another one which offers 10,000 visitors for about £8.00. only signed up for them yesterday and have only had 40 hits so far. Try them out at those costs its a no brainer:

citywidehits.com
fulltraffic.net

let me know how you get on

[Nelsor]

Hi, are the visitors looking for the kind of products we are promoting? If not you may just get 1000 or so visitors that are simply looking to purchase blue widgets for example. Anyway will have a look and see if its worth the investment. What are the links to the relevant pages? Just done abit more tweaking tonight, inserted a couple more links and put some more keywords in the Adwords account...will see how it goes.