Suggestions on converting sales

[andyb23]

Have only recently set up my site at the moment have had about 40 visitors but no sales. Can anyone give me any advice on what i can change to convert sales.

www.yourfreedomlifestyle.com

Thanks

[DRSharpe]

Hi

I would remove the link and image to HighProfits in the first paragraph. I think that you will get a lot of users exiting your site from that as its the first link there, and of course they have to make a sale before you earn any money off them. Also, it can discredit your site and reviews a little if your customers realise that you are earning comissions off the sales you make from your reviews

Cheers
Dave

[jonnyellins]

Firstly I noticed some text from the template; you need UNIQUE text throughout your website and then you'll start ranking for keywords.

Another biggie is backlinks; if no-one links to your site then Google thinks it's not very important. You could start a blog that talks about making money and link back to your site for example and link back to your site from it. Other ways of getting great linkbacks are by writing articles on sites such as ezinearticles.com or squidoo.com. You can also go on forums and write useful posts and include your link below them to your site.

Here's a free link to your site -> Freedom Lifestlye

[andyb23]

thanks for your comments guys, i will amend the site and let you know when its ready to review.

Thanks again

[lorenhoward]

Try to get some traffic from your main keyword "BEST MONEY MAKING PROGRAM". This keyword will convert your visitors.

[Oleyea]

To be straight-forward and honest with you:

Forget links, forget keywords, forget PPC for a second. And ask yourself these questions. "As a visitor, what value do I find here? And what impression do I get from this site?"

For me personally, I feel like a visited the site of a salesman. And I do not want to be "sold to", I make my own decisions and I am quite capable of doing the research needed myself. You understand what I mean here?

What I found was why you liked these sites and why you feel the general public will too. But you did not give me a reason to listen to your opinion. So what I am left with is recommendations from an anonymous guy online. I might click the links out of curiosity, or I might not. But I am not convinced that this will meet my personal needs.

Create more valuable information for the visitor. Give the visitor a reason to trust and believe in your opinion, and then hit them with a more "involving" sales pitch. Value + trust = sales

Thats my two cents..

[affiliatet]

Great advice Oleyea - totally agree with you!

~ Paul

[americanfridge]

This is very helpful =) Thanks for this.

[bluesky]

thank for the great advise oleyea.

But it is very difficult to make it